Promises were made

Here’s an old poem I just stumbled upon and wanted to share with you ^^
I decided not to edit anything, even though I’m not completely happy with the way it is now…

Feel free to like, dislike, comment, or criticise! =)

PS. New poetry coming soon!


Promises were made

Broken in pieces

Shattered through lies

Hopeless end


Unwilling heart

Breaking free

Life is calling

Still locked


Divided mind

Unable for deciding

Can’t take risks

Painful hurt


Love doesn’t fail

Choices are wrong

Wanting the best

Pick the worst


Caring for you

Memories fly by

Feelings inside

Pure and true


Together we’ll stand

Faults are forgiven

New promises made

Will they last?


(April 2009)


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