Miles Away

The song-like poem below is something I’ve been working on earlier, but just couldn’t finish until now. It just felt right to repeat the second couplet, so it turned out to be more like a song with a chorus, even though I don’t really have a melody for it in my head… Let me know what you think of it!

Feel free to like, dislike, comment, or criticise! =)

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Lying here awake at night

Thinking about what I feel inside

I wish that you could hold me now

When all the words escape me somehow

 

Even though you’re miles away

I still hope you’ll come here to stay

My dreams are full of you and me

I wish that you would only see

We’re meant to be

 

I am scared of what might come

Afraid that I will do it all wrong

I wish that you were here with me

To help me see who I can be

 

Even though you’re miles away

I still hope you’ll come here to stay

My dreams are full of you and me

I wish that you would only see

We’re meant to be

 

I want to know what it’s like

To be loved by the perfect guy

Although my dreams may look surreal

This is just the way I feel

 

Even though you’re miles away

I still hope you’ll come here to stay

My dreams are full of you and me

I wish that you would only see

We’re meant to be

Just you and me…

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