On the 19th of November, Jamie gave me the following sentence:
“She was a woman who loved with her ears, yet he was a man who loved with his eyes… Was it ever love at all?”
I’ve tried coming up with something for a few days, but all that remained were these few sentences. Somehow I felt like there was something missing, but it also felt complete already. So I just decided to post it as it is and not force it into a larger story (at least for now). I’d really like to know what you think of it, so…
Feel free to like, dislike, comment, or criticise! =)
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Neither of them spoke about their feelings. They didn’t really know if they actually loved each other or that it was only lust. He always complimented her and always knew how to seduce her with his words and his dark voice. And she was so beautiful that he just couldn’t resist her if he was anywhere near her. Especially when it was just the two of them. She was a woman who loved with her ears, yet he was a man who loved with his eyes… Was it ever love at all?
Just me... 
Beautiful and yes, perfect the way it is – you captured just what I was thinking – quite scary infact… Good work! Cheers J
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Thanks so much! Means a lot! =) It’s indeed quite scary that I captured your thoughts, but hey, great minds think alike, right? ^^
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It means a lot to me that you took the challenge on! And yeah – scary indeed…. Cheers J
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^^
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Like it the way it is, JM^^
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Glad to hear that ^^ Thanks!
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Perfect the way it is…Short and simple always packs a punch far better than drawn out and over thought…Awesome write :)
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you think it’s great like this, means a lot to me ^^
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